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Tuesday, 9 July 2013

pair poem mamie


my broken  

arm

 

I waved at dad and dashed straight

To class. The deck was slippery and

Thought I should stop. Then all of a sunden

i lost my balance and then suddenly fell.

It felt like I  was flying in the air like a BIRD.SMASH! I landed straight on my arm.

It felt like i wanted to burst out crying but

I tried to hold it in. my arm felt so panful

i never felt this feeling before it was horrible. i slowly walked in

To class trying to hold my arm up. But was no use it just flopped

Straight back down. I told the teacher what happened

She asked me if I could wriggle my fingers I could.

So she asked me to sit down and see what happens

At the end of the day.

At 3.00 clock when mum came to pick me up . I told her what

Happened but she took no notice. I told her again and again,

And finally took to me the doctors.

We had a x-ray but I was a nervous mum asked what happened.

Then the doctor said It was Brocken. When I went back to school in a cast  everyone was shocked. I

sat down feeling happy.

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